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What ‘On-line’ Has Done….. ? !!

02 Mar

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Born black and now totally white  Poet

What have you done to your hair Poet ?

 

Born white and now totally black… Poet

What have you done to your heart Poet ?

 

 steal-read others but don’t ‘like’ Poet

Why insecure, unfair and jealous Poet ?

 

You are a poet and only a poet, Poet

And forgot to be a great being…Poet

 

Great poets don’t make great beings Poet

Great beings only make great poets, Poet

 

Born black and now totally white  Poet

What have you done to your hair Poet ?

 

Born white and now totally black Poet

What ‘On-line’ done to your heart Poet ?

 

Yours truly,
‘religiously’ religion-less and ‘religion-less-ly’ religious !!

SN

http://in.linkedin.com/pub/surinder-nath/4b/ba4/43b

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18 Comments

Posted by on March 2, 2015 in Humor

 

18 responses to “What ‘On-line’ Has Done….. ? !!

  1. Bikramjit

    March 2, 2015 at 7:16 am

    Chaman mein mukhtaliff rangon boo se baat banti hai
    hum hi hum hain to kya hum hain
    tum hi tum ho…to…kya tum ho !!

    I think everyone has become like that..

     
  2. SaBiscuit

    March 2, 2015 at 8:32 am

    This sounds like a poet I know, but he was born “white”. For some reason, I thought of Michael Jackson. I absolutely agree that “Great beings only make great poets.” The poetry is a product of your value as a thinking person. There’s a lot of symbolism and layered meaning here, and I appreciated the read. Wonderful work as usual.

     
    • surindernath

      March 2, 2015 at 10:02 am

      Thanks.

      Some things are better… left ‘un-said’ !!

       
      • SaBiscuit

        March 2, 2015 at 10:02 am

        I feel and understand that very much. Warmest regards, SB.

         
      • surindernath

        March 2, 2015 at 10:05 am

        Thanks.

        Same here !!

         
  3. Alka Girdhar

    March 2, 2015 at 9:04 am

    So is it not a good idea to openly display our creative work here on Word Press? If there are chances that somebody will steal our good work, then it is probably better to write a book, be it an e-book…

     
    • surindernath

      March 2, 2015 at 10:00 am

      “Work” can be stolen but the “worker” behind and THE……. God’s GRACE on him / her, can not be……stolen !!

       
  4. Rekhaaa

    March 3, 2015 at 10:46 am

    What can I say about the poet in you 😉 loved it sir ji.

     
    • surindernath

      March 3, 2015 at 11:21 am

      A poet should not spare anyone including his / her own self !!

       
      • Rekhaaa

        March 3, 2015 at 11:26 am

        Oh! is that so. lol

         
      • surindernath

        March 3, 2015 at 12:28 pm

        “Hum kisee se kam nahin” !! LOL !!

         
  5. Aquileana

    March 3, 2015 at 11:05 am

    Nice one… How creative, Surindernath… Have a great day! Best wishes. Aquileana ;D

     
  6. Ankur Mithal

    March 11, 2015 at 6:00 am

    Point well made. Very difficult to track who is copying what, where. As always, there are two sides to technological progress.

     
  7. Sonia D'Costa

    January 16, 2016 at 2:57 am

    Ha ha… an attack on plagiarism?

     
  8. surindernath

    January 16, 2016 at 4:18 am

    Yes kind of…..and…..other things ( e.g. ‘Literary voyeurism’ )

     

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